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I felt guilty that I'd never actually uploaded a drawing of Emilie, soo...

Partially inspired by [link]

Critiques (as always) welcome.
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Okay, I'm assuming this is the picture you wanted me to basically assess hehe ^.^ and it's a pleasure to do so!
Might I add that, considering what you usually draw like, this is impressive!
How long did this take you to draw? :3

Okay, to improve I would say that...........you see the bump on the head (on the left side), you have that basically right all I'd say is that's a bit "bumpy" if that makes sense? All though it's only a tiddley bit bumpy hehe :3 and it doesn't really need improving, you can get away with that!

Hmm....Also I'd say the neck is a tad off :/ uhh... I can't really say how you could improve that, without actually showing you lol so if you show me the picture I'll show how I would do it....

and....uh...I suppose the eyes are a tad off as well...they're a bit on the small side, although it's not that bad, I'd only say a tiny itty bitty weenee bit bigger.

Other than that, you're getting better! ....muwhahaha but never as good as me!!!!!!! > : D

If you don't understand any of the things I've said, bring me the picture and I'll show you what I mean! Or I'll copy what you've done and add the bits I think could be improved on! Your choice! ~
I hope this helped!